Is this like a adult and child team-up effort? If it is, I love it! (I like the drawing either way.)
So. Um. I'm just gonna come out and say it. In the original. What is Robin's face...doing? There?
I love the coloring book aesthetic of this piece. Brings back all kinds of memories and works really well stylistically. Also, tight composition and nice framing. That punch packs a lot stronger hit framed and cropped the way you did.
Thanks for the comments - Yes, its a colab with my 2 and a half year old...Haha not too sure what Robin was thinking in the original either!!